Research indicates that the characteristics we are born with have much more influence on our personality and development than any experience we may have in our life.
Which do you consider to be the major influence?
Investigations have found out that effect of innate nature on one's characteristics surpasses that of any experience that we encounter in our life time. I agree with this investigation as even numerous experiences fail to change the personality of a person.
Each person is born with a unique talent that sets the course of his life. This means that the behavior and growth of an individual will remain similar in all circumstances irrespective of situation. For instance, an introvert person will always be a little apprehensive, while in a social situation. Clearly, being introvert as a behavioral aspect will be there forever. In addition, when people are born with peculiar traits, their interaction is stylized. That means a cool headed person will not be perturbed even under dire situations. To illustrate, M. K. Gandhi, never retaliated despite the fact that he was racially discriminated. He was always calm and composed. Hence, the traits, which are acquired from birth are crucial to characteristics.
On the contrary, personal experience may have unremarkable effect in molding personality and growth. The person may behave differently because the situation may have demanded for him to behave in that manner. For example, an innately frugal person becomes spendthrift, while partying with friends. By this, he is able to draw attention towards himself for a while, nevertheless, remaining expenditure conscious at all other times. Certainly, personal experience is only effective temporarily.
In conclusion, although personal experiences create some impact on quality of a person, they are unable to change the innate nature of a person. Therefore, I strongly support the findings of the research about qualities by birth affecting individual's personality and development. I feel, perhaps, no quantum of personal experience can change a person.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'lifetime'?
Suggestion: lifetime
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Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, may, nevertheless, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, i feel, in addition, in conclusion, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1582.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.49305555556 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.19456521511 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.607638888889 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 502.2 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.944476723 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.1 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.4 20.7667163134 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246761507975 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0697392998238 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.064521738355 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156557930196 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0647490091046 0.056905535591 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.97 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.1 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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