School children should be enouaged for competitiveness.
Do you agree or disagree?
There has been a remarkable surge of competitiveness amongst students in the recent past which could be seen going manifolds now. such positive sense of motivation should certainly be encouraged for desired outcome.
Firstly acknowledging good work done by children should not only raises their spirit of doing better or probably best but it also helps them cultivate their potential and learn how to putforth the demonstration of what they do creatively.
Secondly motivating students for fruitful reasons leads to a healthy competitiveness where a child attempt more lessons or techniques of education.
In addition to these solid reasons I strongly agree to such notion of encouraging school students as this causes an urge of achieving more and taking up further challenges with an upbeat spirit. On the other hand such atmosphere of competion makes students studying in academic institutions more confident and descover new ideas or patterns.
To summarize the above points one must admire students for all the commendable jobs made by them and not only teachers but parents too must raise the bar for best academic results for children.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 131, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Such
...hich could be seen going manifolds now. such positive sense of motivation should cer...
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Line 2, column 66, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[3]
Message: The verb 'should' requires base form of the verb: 'raise'
Suggestion: raise
...d work done by children should not only raises their spirit of doing better or probabl...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, in addition, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 967.0 1615.20841683 60% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 182.0 315.596192385 58% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31318681319 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 4.20363070211 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90212373673 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.71978021978 0.561755894193 128% => OK
syllable_count: 295.2 506.74238477 58% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 46.6895959219 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.142857143 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.8571428571 7.06120827912 168% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194159417051 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0773463549007 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0523773223271 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0910953600076 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0396302057905 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.0946893788 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.61 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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