Some people think that school children need to learn practical skills such as car maintenance or bank account management along with the academic subjects at school. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Acquiring practical skills has been always considered crucial for schools goers. However, amending schooling curriculum by adding some pragmatic skills namely, driving, repairing , bank account management etc. would be feasible to some extent . The essay will explain my perspective for the problems associated with it along with the need.
The prominent rewarding advantage includes self help and life saving techniques. Simply car maintenance, for instance, requires one to handle complexity of tools and equipments which can be learnt at school. Although, masses prefer calling mechanics , but what if got stuck in remote area?Suppose, head beam stops working, teenager having knowledge of mechanics would be able to fix the car ik minutes.
Besides, confidence comes with independency. Hence, grasping skills such as cooking, driving and account Handling makes then future ready.
In case they have to stay away from home, no matter what the reason is, youngsters will never have any hassle to cook for themselves.
Not only self dependency, but privacy and security of accounts are also important for one who knows how to handle data.
Conversely, juveniles these days are struggling to balance between academics and leisure time. Would not the free tome be compromised after adding practical subjects to school curriculum? Indeed, Children cannnot be stressed for learning Anything for the sake of their psychological health.
Conclusively, despite the negative repercussions of adding practical subjects, schools remains focus on imparting these skills for the betterment of Children.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, conversely, hence, however, if, so, then, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1364.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 239.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.70711297071 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83849108216 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.744769874477 0.561755894193 133% => OK
syllable_count: 405.0 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.3742160416 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.9333333333 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9333333333 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.53333333333 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.38176352705 160% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272197221071 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0809565611572 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0552290757703 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109790143194 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0831072855433 0.056905535591 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.54 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.13 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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