Schools are no longer necessary because children can get so much information available through the internet and they can study just as well at home.
To what extent do you agree or disagree
Studying online is considered as more convenient than in schools as vast information is available on various websites. While online information is quite useful, educational premises are imperative for holistic development of children
To begin with the importance of educational institutes, presence of teacher is of utmost importance to make pupils understand regarding the subject as difficult asks or curriculum can be challenged for understanding of students. Thus, in schools more information can be gained. For example, practical knowledge of physics subjects can only be learnt in laboratories available in institutions. Therefore, it is right to say that institutions are playing more important role in the lives of students
Furthermore, skills of teamwork are only be enhanced in peer groups, learners spend a lot of time in schools with their classmates which inculcate the feeling of team spirit and cooperative behaviour is also adopted by them to fulfill any task together. As an instance, many quiz competitions and group discussions are organised by the school which upsurge the cooperative skills and the collaborative skills among the children, by encourage them to get success which is not available in online classes. Ergo, it is very beneficial for their mental and social development. However, the people whose opinion is to teach children online think that it saves the time of children as they study by sitting at home which also allow parents to stay with them all the time, it will strengthen the bonds between parents and children
To conclude, majority of students are gaining academic skills for schools which is imperative than online learning and E-learning can cause distractions among the children while showing ads.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, regarding, so, then, therefore, thus, while, for example, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1485.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.4197080292 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01109931055 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.57299270073 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 464.4 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 20.2975951904 168% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 142.535083401 49.4020404114 289% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 185.625 106.682146367 174% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.25 20.7667163134 165% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.875 7.06120827912 182% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174024644325 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0837975073835 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.055296385947 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103242546699 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0130286016471 0.056905535591 23% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.2 13.0946893788 162% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 28.51 50.2224549098 57% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.7 11.3001002004 157% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.75 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.82 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.1190380762 154% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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