Should private schools receive government funding Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience

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Should private schools receive government funding?
Give reasons for your answer, and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Private schools are those which are established and managed by a private trust. I will involve only K-12 schools under the purview of ‘schools’ in this argument. Children are the future of a country and the educational experience they receive from a young age goes a long way in shaping them. Every country has a mixture of government schools and private schools. I personally believe that private schools should not receive any funding from the government. I will buttress my point of view and give further suggestions in the following paragraphs.
It is a known fact that private educational institutions collect a larger fee from enrolled students when compared to government funded educational institutions. The fee collected not only goes towards maintenance of infrastructure, but also for the hiring of skilled teachers, who generally command higher salaries. The teacher to student ratio is lower in private educational institutions because their focus is to provide a one-on-one educational experience for their students. This leads to students grasping concepts better than if they were in a classroom with more number of children, which is the case in all government funded schools. The laboratories in private schools are well equipped with the latest instruments and give students a head start in observing various scientific phenomena.
The number of co-curricular and extra-curricular activities in private schools are innumerable in order to mould the children into well-rounded individuals. In addition to the traditional sports that are offered in government schools, private schools offer horse riding, swimming, tennis, hockey, ballet, music lessons, to name a few. These are taught by experienced professionals and on world standard courts for the respective sports.
In the United States, public schools are free to attend whereas private schools cost anywhere between $1,000 and $4,000 monthly per student, depending on the school management and location of the school. The children who go to government funded schools are generally from the middle class or lower. They cannot afford private school education and hence, miss out on many activities and a good overall educational experience. In light of this, I would go a step ahead and necessitate that private schools should offer a small portion of their budget to the government schools in their county. Governments can reward such social responsibility from private schools by providing them with better tax breaks. In this way, the money received from private schools can be utilized towards developing the infrastructure in government funded schools. This would result in a reduction in the gap between government school’s educational experience and that of a private one. The children graduating from both these types of schools will, more or less, be on equal footing when the time comes for them to join the workforce.
In conclusion, I would like to reiterate that private schools should not be privy to government funding because they are rich institutions with world-class facilities. These facilities enable the children to have a more well-balanced educational experience. However, with the long term effects of having a gulf of skills between private school educated children and government school educated children in mind, the government should require private schools to divert a small portion of their budget to government schools in order for the betterment of their infrastructure. They can reward these schools with tax incentives, among other things, should they opt to help government schools. Therefore, I believe that the long-term effect of private schools funding government schools is the creation of a more skilled workforce in a country and therefore, a better economy.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, so, therefore, well, whereas, in addition, in conclusion, more or less

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 87.0 41.998997996 207% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 31.0 8.3376753507 372% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3195.0 1615.20841683 198% => OK
No of words: 588.0 315.596192385 186% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43367346939 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.9242980521 4.20363070211 117% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01157536313 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 272.0 176.041082164 155% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.462585034014 0.561755894193 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 955.8 506.74238477 189% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 5.43587174349 239% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 9.0 2.52805611222 356% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 16.0721442886 168% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.24586284 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.333333333 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7777777778 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.74074074074 7.06120827912 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 3.4128256513 352% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.294907248678 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104000242644 0.084324248473 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0636713014875 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.194137742666 0.151304729494 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.066899763173 0.056905535591 118% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 129.0 78.4519038076 164% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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