Smoking is a major cause of serious illness and death throughout the world today. What are impacts of this? What can the government do to solve the problem?
More and more people get sick and die for cigarettes. There are many good reasons to stop people smoking, and the essay will suggest a few solutions to eliminate this situation.
Smoking has significant negative impacts on both individuals and society. At an individual level, smoking diminishes the saving budgets of people. When smokers spend too much on cigarettes, they cannot save much money for their future and are more likely to be in the financial crisis. At the social scale, people who are addicted to smoking would bear a burden on the healthcare system. The government must spend more the national budget on building hospitals and hiring physicians to take care of patients, who are ill for smoking.
There are several measures that the government can do to tackle with the negatives of smoking. First, the tobacco tax should be on the rise every year so that smokers cannot afford this item and, thus, cigarette manufacturers will have to cut down their production due to the revenue loss. Second, the government should prohibit smoking in public places such as bars or restaurants and allow smoking on one's house only. A big fine also needs to be applied to individuals who intentionally violate the smoking rules.
In conclusion, smoking has a variety of tremendous effects at both individual and social levels, and I believe that the responsibilities of the government are to prevent this problem going on. Some suggestions are also given to decline in the number of smokers and help individuals become richer and healthier.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, second, so, thus, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1289.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03515625 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7492647055 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6015625 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 405.9 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.4014835512 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.1538461538 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6923076923 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.38461538462 7.06120827912 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138158612674 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0501761463374 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0429783748412 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0766983539461 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0344276270902 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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