Some people argue that job satisfaction is more important than job security, while others believe that they cannot always expect job satisfaction, and a permanent job is more important. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Many people are willing to leave their jobs because they find job satisfaction is more crucial than any factors. I understand the reason behind that, but will argue that job permanent is the only factor to be considered.
On the one hand, it is understandable why many people look for job satisfaction only when seeking a job. When people are satisfied with their jobs, they feel more energetic and creative in the workplace. Working time will not a series of tedious and stressful days, lasting from 9 to 5, but a period filled with enthusiasm and passion. Even if people have to work extra hours, they still feel worthy because their devotion for work is volunteer. For example, although working hard 14 hours every day, Elon Musk, a reputable CEO, never gets bored with his job. He always has a sense of fulfillment because he can spend his time doing his favorite job.
On the other, I agree that job security is too crucial for workers to be underrated. The market labour nowadays is dramatically competitive since available job positions do not cover the number of annual college graduates. As a result, people have to study harder to be more qualified if they want to get a job offer. Moreover, even when people have jobs, no certainty for their long-lasting positions. The popularity of automatic machines put millions of people in unemployment since many employers decide to use robots to replace a large number of staff. These facts show that if people are too picky for jobs, they easily get unemployed and have difficulties in finance.
In conclusion, job satisfaction is important because it encourages people to be productive; however, sometimes, it is overrated. In my opinion, a permanent job is more crucial because the labor market now is unstable and it is hard for people to keep a job long-lasting.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 533, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...ployers decide to use robots to replace a large number of staff. These facts show that if people ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, moreover, so, still, thus, for example, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1514.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86816720257 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77753953365 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.556270096463 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 481.5 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 20.0716490043 49.4020404114 41% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 94.625 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4375 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5625 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.364293757599 0.244688304435 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.13044153356 0.084324248473 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100074935594 0.0667982634062 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.263807156983 0.151304729494 174% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0785267682953 0.056905535591 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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