In some areas of the US, a 'curfew' is imposed, in which teenagers are not allowed to be out of doors after a particular time at night unless they are accompanied by an adult.
what is your opinion about this?
there is a restriction about time for American youngsters that they are banned from going out at late night without going with their parents. In my opinion, that is really effective in manage youngsters as well as to protect their health and I will analyze that as follow.
Firstly, the policy can help adolescents prevent dangers from outside at night. Nowadays, you can find that at night there are many activities at entertaining places, therefore teenagers can join these activities easily. They do not aware of some possible bad things that can harm them. For example, they do not know that drinking beer can lead to many health problems.
Secondly, hanging out late can bring some negative impacts on teenagers' academic performance at school, basically because they will not have a night of adequate sleep for school performance. If curfew is applied, it will help youngsters have more studying time, they will tend to spend evening time at their house to do homework as well as to prepare for new lessons, so that is necessary for them to achieve a good result at school.
In conclusion, I totally agree that parent should apply curfew, the reasons are because that benefits the children in their academic performance at school as well as avoiding a lot of dangers at night
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, really, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, as to, for example, in conclusion, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 10.4138276553 10% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1068.0 1615.20841683 66% => OK
No of words: 218.0 315.596192385 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89908256881 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55747829466 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 176.041082164 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.582568807339 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 327.6 506.74238477 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.0633176587 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.666666667 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2222222222 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.1111111111 7.06120827912 200% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174982113514 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0769034393462 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0354932960991 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108228158682 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0195074587597 0.056905535591 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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