Writing introduce and conclusion of the following essay:
Many working people get little or no exercise either during the working day or in their free time, and have health problems as a result.
why do many working people not get enough exercise?
what can be done about this problem?
Introduce:
There is a view that workers hardly do exercise, and that can lead to some negative impacts on them. In this essay, i will analyze the causes before expressing my own view as well as my own solution as follow
Conclusion:
In conclusion, the lack of doing exercise for workers is a serious issue, and they should improve that statement. The reasons they rarely do exercise are they do not much time to do that and after working time, they feel too tired to do anything. To solve that problem, laborers and their companies should apply some effective methods to work out more.
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- Writing introduce and conclusion of the following essay:Many working people get little or no exercise either during the working day or in their free time, and have health problems as a result.why do many working people not get enough exercise?what can be 22
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
Introduce: There is a view that workers hardly do e...
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...egative impacts on them. In this essay, i will analyze the causes before expressi...
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... my own view as well as my own solution as follow Conclusion: In conclusion, the ...
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Suggestion:
... own solution as follow Conclusion: In conclusion, the lack of doing exercis...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, well, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 41.998997996 29% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 491.0 1615.20841683 30% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 104.0 315.596192385 33% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72115384615 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.19343686757 4.20363070211 76% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43052503033 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 72.0 176.041082164 41% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.692307692308 0.561755894193 123% => OK
syllable_count: 153.9 506.74238477 30% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 54.2609435967 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.75 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.75 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.38176352705 46% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181598302158 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0976492525536 0.084324248473 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.046222999499 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122210375199 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0677373197138 0.056905535591 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 78.4519038076 32% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 22.4719101124 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.