Some believe that government should take care of retirees while others think everyone should save for their own retirement.
Retirement is that part of life where a person might not have a steady income. Every person faces this stage in life and it would be wise to plan for it. Though there are controversies, with respect to governments role in
retirement, I have outlined a few points to put forth my point.
Firstly government pension plns would certainly maintain peoples standard of living above the countries poverty line. "Retirement Funds" is an oppertunity in disguise for the government to invest such that the profits can
be devided between the retiree and the government. Such process could also accelerate the groeth of economy. For instance, When money is set aside for pension with the
government there is a sence of relief for the individual that his/her money is safe.
Secondly, uncertainity of future has encoraged people to set side money in forms of investment and liquid cash, reasonbeing the needs of people will very . Statistics states that human needs have grown many folds over
time and would be unwise to depend only on governemnt pension. Untill such time government has customised pension based on the requirement of the individual, there exists a need to save for retirement. For example, Canadian
government despite providing financial aid for its residents, have made medical services free upto 80%, thereby improving the life expectency and the standard of living of their people.
To sum-up government should take care of its people through pension, However in order to have a better standard of living people should also plan for it according to their requirements, as the expectation of people differs to a
great extent when it comes to country like India.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, with respect to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1429.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17753623188 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80933701445 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.601449275362 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 442.8 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.3849771393 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.083333333 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.25 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 10.0 4.38176352705 228% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19627270335 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.06247446358 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0576400754203 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0707034896201 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0610717355853 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.18 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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