Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? My lifestyle is easier and more comfortable
than the one my grandparents experienced when they were young. Use specific reasons and
examples to support your choice.
Most of us know how science and technology is evolving, along with which our lifestyles are also
changing. According to me we are definitely living a better life than our grandparents. I feel strong
on this for two reasons which, I will be detailing in the following.
Firstly, innovation and creation has grown and it has no limits. Our houses are now with better
facilities like internet, gadgets, comfortable furniture, modern kitchen and many more wonders to
keep us comfortable. We can shop from our homes, get food from all types of restaurants at our
door step and it will just get better in the future. Our forerunners didn’t have all these facilities. They
had to work more harder than we are putting in. For example, with one tap we can now send
messages or make a call to anyone at any part of the country instantly but, it was not the same case
with our grandparents. They used telegram or postal service which took them weeks, months or
even a year to reach the receiver and get a reply back.
Secondly, we have better transportation, healthcare and education facilities. Our grandparents had
to use their foot to travel far and wide or to any place they desired and also, they barely had any
hospitals or schools nearby, they always had to travel a lot for the same. We now get good
education and amazing treatment with best doctors around. We also have transports like car, metro
trains, flights. For example, we have at least one hospital and school in every area. We have got
medications for most of the diseases which was once a reason for so many deaths.
For conclusion, I strongly believe that we lead an easier and comfortable life compared to our
grandparents. This is because of the advancement in science and technology which has changed our
lives completely and also because of the better facilities we are receiving.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 11, Rule ID: ACCORDING_TO_ME[1]
Message: This phrase can sound awkward in English. Consider using 'in my opinion' or 'I think'.
Suggestion: In my opinion; I think
...hich our lifestyles are also changing. According to me we are definitely living a better life ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 8, column 13, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'harder' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: harder
...all these facilities. They had to work more harder than we are putting in. For example, wi...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, at least, for example, i feel
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 52.1666666667 67% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1558.0 1977.66487455 79% => OK
No of words: 323.0 407.700716846 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82352941176 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73553545991 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56346749226 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 477.9 618.680645161 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 18.0 9.59856630824 188% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.420914071 48.9658058833 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.5555555556 100.406767564 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9444444444 20.6045352989 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.55555555556 5.45110844103 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 20.0 4.53405017921 441% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0983524470637 0.236089414692 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0332031171636 0.076458572812 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0301652265862 0.0737576698707 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0326797417284 0.150856017488 22% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0274653967237 0.0645574589148 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 11.7677419355 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.38 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.61 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 86.8835125448 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.