In some country’s children have very strict rules of behaviour, while in other countries they are allowed to do almost anything they want.
To what extent should children have to follow rules?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
The regulations which a small schooler should follow has long been debated. In some parts of the Asian continent parents have a command on their children while in the western countries where the rules are liberal for the children and give more freedom at a younger age.
A child is considered as the future generation. They should learn moral skills at an early age so that they are more conscious at a later part of life. If they are obedient to their elders, then they continue respecting their elders when they reach adulthood. The recent survey in Asian countries revealed that the present generation respect the elders a lot and keep their parents with them rather than sending them to old age homes.
The western culture encourages kids to enjoy the freedom which they are granted at a younger stage of life. the kids are free to choose what they want to do with their life. The present generation are not taking care of their parents when they attain old age since the respect towards them must be sowed upon their hearts when they are small. A recent incident in New York caught the headlines where a school goer had filed a case against his own parents stating that he was molested for attaining lower grades in school.
The future generations need the liberalism which is required to build their careers on their own. The moral skills cannot be learnt with much freedom and needs to be learnt in a strict manner. The rules of behavior should be learnt along with life skills under a supervised condition and after the basic skills are learnt then the child is free to learn whatever suits him.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...are granted at a younger stage of life. the kids are free to choose what they want ...
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...ith much freedom and needs to be learnt in a strict manner. The rules of behavior should be learnt...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... needs to be learnt in a strict manner. The rules of behavior should be learnt alon...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1332.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69014084507 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.22631854126 2.80592935109 79% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.535211267606 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 393.3 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 10.0 2.52805611222 396% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.7684256095 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.461538462 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8461538462 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.46153846154 7.06120827912 21% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18480838319 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.066592305362 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0699796252984 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126922744752 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0823579675031 0.056905535591 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 50.2224549098 134% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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