In some countries, employees are generally given two weeks of paid vacations time each year. In other countries, employees are given four to six weeks of paid vacation time.
Consider the needs of both employee and employer, what do you think is the reasonable amount of paid vacation time for employees to have? Give reasons for your answer and include may relevant examples from your knowledge of experience.
In today's world, competition between corporates is increasing. Ignorance of anything, bring the company to the path of losses. If companies have to make profits then the availability of skilled works is necessary. If holidays for about six weeks have been sanctioned then it becomes very difficult to provide the deliverables in allotted time period. However, big multinational companies can still digest long vacations of employees as they always having a backup of each employee in a team.
But the major issue is employee satisfaction. From the profit perspective, if a company is giving paid leaves then the issue of cost cutting will hinder growth. So paid leaves of almost 2 weeks is enough. However, an employer will never understand the concerns. I would like to share an example, a friend of mine needs to commute to his hometowns for marriage. In marriage ample amount of expenditures has to be done. But employer neither given any kind of paid leaves nor allowed leave of more than a week.
Another example, I took a leave of 3 months as I was not well. The employer did not approve any reimbursement and even put my case on the loss of pay. When I came back, in my first salary, they deducted welfare trust amount of 3 months. If they are not giving me basic salary then it is not appropriate to deduct an amount of 3 months on the sake of welfare.
In compendium, I always suggest keeping a bigger team which avoid dependency. And, in genuine cases, it would be better to permit at least 2 weeks of paid leaves which make employees satisfied with the company and help the employer to deliver in stipulated time period.
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...ucted welfare trust amount of 3 months. If they are not giving me basic salary the...
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'so', 'still', 'then', 'well', 'as to', 'at least', 'kind of']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.256329113924 0.247107183377 104% => OK
Verbs: 0.155063291139 0.155533422707 100% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0727848101266 0.0946595960268 77% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0632911392405 0.0501214627716 126% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0474683544304 0.0437548338989 108% => OK
Prepositions: 0.126582278481 0.122226691241 104% => OK
Participles: 0.0411392405063 0.0403226058552 102% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.73448258042 2.80594681477 97% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0316455696203 0.0326793684256 97% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0854430379747 0.0861772015684 99% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0158227848101 0.021408717616 74% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00949367088608 0.011925033212 80% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1640.0 1933.35771543 85% => OK
No of words: 286.0 316.048096192 90% => OK
Chars per words: 5.73426573427 6.12580529183 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20517956788 98% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.342657342657 0.374742101984 91% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.244755244755 0.28420135186 86% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.153846153846 0.203846283523 75% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.101398601399 0.137316102897 74% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73448258042 2.80594681477 97% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.037074148 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590909090909 0.56093040696 105% => OK
Word variations: 63.5932720556 60.7387585426 105% => OK
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0891783567 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.8888888889 20.7743622355 76% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.9226389273 49.517814964 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.1111111111 127.492653851 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8888888889 20.7743622355 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.611111111111 0.814263465372 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 3.99599198397 50% => OK
Readability: 40.3644133644 49.1944974215 82% => OK
Elegance: 1.59523809524 1.69124875643 94% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.433864429429 0.332605444948 130% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.102270748834 0.102741220458 100% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0798128796623 0.0668466124924 119% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.47316429045 0.534860350844 88% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.14090773769 0.148594505496 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.142576693225 0.134430193775 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0662452546452 0.0742795772207 89% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.263971201158 0.324371583561 81% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0855741704433 0.0638462369009 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.277623431938 0.228012699653 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0496384846376 0.058150111329 85% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.68436873747 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.41683366733 146% => OK
Positive topic words: 3.0 5.90881763527 51% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.5751503006 39% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 1.9629258517 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 4.0 10.4468937876 38% => More topic words wanted.
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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