Why is it difficult to define?
What factors are important in achieving happiness?
Most people look for happiness due to its crucial role in their life. But noone can give exact definition of happiness.
Most people look for happiness due to its crucial role in their life. But noone can give exact definition of happiness.
In my view, everyone has various criteria to feel happy. For example, i’m delighted when seeing my sons gain any achievements at school, while the other people are not. In contrast, they just have good mood because of money that wins from business transactions. Therefore, the definition of happiness varies from each person depending on their desires which is done or not.
It seems to me that the determinants of happiness are rather enormous. Firstly, you should ignore the negative information by focusing on your objectives which spend a lot of time. In addition, you should not so ambitious that you can not reach it and this case can causes the stress affecting the mental health.
In conclusion, concept of happiness hardly defines because everyone has different level of satisfaction in their life and not everyone can keep their mind positive and peaceful.
- You recently sent some documents by post but they did not arrive Write a letter to the post manager In your letter o Give details of the situation o Describe the documents o Say what action you want the post office to take 56
- Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages 61
- Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages 61
- Why is it difficult to define What factors are important in achieving happiness Most people look for happiness due to its crucial role in their life But noone can give exact definition of happiness 68
- Some modern artists receive huge sums of money for the things they create while others struggle to survive Governments should take steps to resolve this unfair situation To what extent do you agree or disagree 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 70, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I’m'?
Suggestion: I’m
...us criteria to feel happy. For example, i’m delighted when seeing my sons gain any ...
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Line 3, column 266, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[2]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'cause'
Suggestion: cause
... you can not reach it and this case can causes the stress affecting the mental health....
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Line 4, column 179, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... keep their mind positive and peaceful.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, look, so, therefore, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in contrast, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 831.0 1615.20841683 51% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 164.0 315.596192385 52% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06707317073 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57858190836 4.20363070211 85% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67434186336 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 176.041082164 65% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.69512195122 0.561755894193 124% => OK
syllable_count: 253.8 506.74238477 50% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.9730983284 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.1 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.7 7.06120827912 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.378302141824 0.244688304435 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.142876903974 0.084324248473 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.172924204116 0.0667982634062 259% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.267244779717 0.151304729494 177% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.24747198944 0.056905535591 435% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.83 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 78.4519038076 45% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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