Some feel governments, rather than private companies, should be in charge of medical services.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
The question regarding medical insurance has always been high in today’s agenda.Some people think that the cabinet ought to pay for medical procedures for citizens, not businessman. I completely agree with this statement and believe that the health care’s system must work in all territory of country and the government must support state clinics.
Firstly, highly likely that individuals can take a trauma or his health get worse not in the hometown. It means that person need help right now, it is emergency. Therefore, the government must devise laws and change the medical services for conveniently and simply all of the system. For example, WHY published the statement, that only 23% of countries by 2021 had a govern paying insurance. In other words, standards of living gradually increase if the cabinet commence the new policy.
Secondly, city clinics and hospitals must have took more funding for development in medical equipment and research diseases. This is because commercial companies strive to own all medical services due to take a benefit. Hence, the Cabinet must refine in medical sphere and buy new medical items for City Clinics. For instance, the anonymous survey by 2019 in the Medical Review wrote that trust rate to the govern medical insurance was decrease by 37%.
In conclusion, I totally agree with this article and think that medical care system must be a qualified and help to patients throughout the country, and the Cabinet must fit up clinics with new equipment and confidently support doctors.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Some
... has always been high in today’s agenda.Some people think that the cabinet ought to ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...government must support state clinics. Firstly, highly likely that individuals ...
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Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...al services for conveniently and simply all of the system. For example, WHY published the ...
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Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
... that only 23% of countries by 2021 had a govern paying insurance. In other words, stand...
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Message: Use past participle here: 'taken'.
Suggestion: taken
...y, city clinics and hospitals must have took more funding for development in medical...
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...Medical Review wrote that trust rate to the govern medical insurance was decrease by 37%. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1293.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 248.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21370967742 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65048821902 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.588709677419 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 395.1 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.5393352147 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.75 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6666666667 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5833333333 7.06120827912 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134154479125 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0520603730992 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.039166348579 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0850165773835 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0261793977715 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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