Some parents and teachers think that children’s behavior should be strictly controlled. While some think that children should be free to behave. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
It is largely believed that children should be allowed to think and act on their own but there is also a contrary to this thought by many. I believe that while it is necessary to let kids do what they like, the primary guardians should also assure the appropriate upbringing of these youngsters. There are certain factors which favour both thoughts.
Firstly, I would like to state that the correct upbringing of the parents correspond to neither being strict nor being lenient. It is more about understanding the special one and driving them through the right path. There is a different level of patience, excitement, fear and anger in each of us, which makes all of us unique. Hence, not all kids might learn to behave in under an authoritative environment. Recently, a college-going student in my acquaintances got expelled from his college abruptly as he terribly lacked the confidence to present his thesis in the class. Upon inquiring, it was found that the boy had a major fear issue which
developed due to the illiberal family environment and extremely disciplined schooling which disabled him from speaking among new people.
Secondly, apart from a few generic rules and regulations, no human can pass the test of life implying the same formula. Thus, it is necessary that every child is given extensive care and counselling while growing up. This is to make sure that we are not moulding them away from their original form but also keeping them safe from harm. To my recent experience, a teenager of my society got addicted to smoking due to excessive leisure from his family and no mentorship. As a result, the kid started making irrational decisions in life. When the family tried to govern him for his actions, he recklessly refused the help and left the house. To top that unfortunate incident, he later got arrested for being indulged in some unlawful activities.
To sum up, the idea of being strict or being completely lenient will never make sense to guide a growing child because it is mandatory that the guardians should understand the psychology of each individual and deal with their behaviour accordingly.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, first, firstly, hence, if, second, secondly, so, thus, while, apart from, in fact, as a result, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 24.0651302605 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1784.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 360.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95555555556 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35587717469 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74407892303 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 224.0 176.041082164 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.622222222222 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 554.4 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.0896653862 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.941176471 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1764705882 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.58823529412 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153590545095 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0423647216778 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0643808642732 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0816062576439 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0658665620182 0.056905535591 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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