You borrowed some books from your college library Unfortunately you have to go to visit a sick relative and cannot return the books on time write a letter to the library Explain what has happened Tell them what you want to do about it Ask if late charges

Essay topics:

You borrowed some books from your college library. Unfortunately, you have to go to visit a sick relative and cannot return the books on time.write a letter to the library.

Explain what has happened

Tell them what you want to do about it.

Ask if late charges can be waived off.

Dear Sir,

I am writing this letter to keep you informed about my urgent visit to Massourie due to an unfortunate accident that my cousin has met with. Also, the due date of returning the book I borrowed is tomorrow.

Last Monday, I had to urgently leave for Massourie as my cousin met with an accident. He is currently undergoing treatment in the City hospital and needs extensive care and attention. Therefore, I need to stay with him for a week or two.

Because of this uncertainty, I will not be able to return the books I borrowed from the Library tomorrow causing an additional penalty as the late fees. However, I will make sure to submit them as soon as I return to college.

I would request you to kindly waive off the late submission penalty from my borrowings and allow an extension to the same.

Yours Sincerely,

ABC

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Average: 8.1 (2 votes)
Essays by user geetha balasub… :

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, so, therefore

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 695.0 937.175257732 74% => OK
No of words: 150.0 206.0 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.63333333333 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.49963551158 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65014884278 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 127.690721649 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.66 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 220.5 290.88556701 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.8595535359 44.8134815571 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.2222222222 76.5299724578 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6666666667 16.8248392259 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.11111111111 4.34317383033 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166056120161 0.216113520407 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0638361011565 0.0766984524023 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0529037306638 0.0603063233224 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10081824892 0.12726935374 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0597606667436 0.0580467560999 103% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 8.37731958763 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.28 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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