Some people are born to be leaders, while others believe leadership can be learnt.
Discuss both views and give opinion.
It is a controversial issue whether leaders are born with innate talents or they became leaders through a lifelong learning process. While there is a tendency to believe that being successful as a leader is something inherent, many people claim this skill can be achieved by a solid plan.
To begin with, it is unarguable that some people are born with a charisma characteristic which helps them to enhance their intellectual abilities as the main requirement for being a leader. This gifted group of people has some inherent capabilities such as decision making or implementing right policies. They know how to react when facing with a challenge and how to control a specific situation. Another innate trait is their ability to make speech in a way to make a profound impression on audiences. Take Barak Obama as an illustrative example. His charismatic character was recognized as one of the main aspect of his success.
By contrast, however, there is convincing evidence which indicates many of leaders became leaders through a prolonged process including gaining experience, mentoring, and relevant education. If we take this view that leadership is a skill, it is logical to accept this idea that it can be learnt. More evidence come from many workshops, courses, and higher education which are running increasingly to promote the efficiency of leader performance. For example, in many well-known companies it is essential for higher position to pass a specific curriculum consist of relevant courses such as Managements or Human Resource knowledge.
In conclusion, taking everything into consideration, despite the fact that some leaders have inborn abilities, it seems that, same as other skill, being a successful leadership is achievable by providing a solid plan and through gaining experiences and knowledge.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, well, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1546.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34948096886 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04019362304 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595155709343 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 486.9 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.6958137443 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.923076923 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2307692308 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.15384615385 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.276275001157 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.084481700475 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0956910634062 0.0667982634062 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169222542586 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0694270048587 0.056905535591 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.05 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.59 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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