Some people believe that children should do what their parents tell them to do; others think children must learn to think for themselves. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Many people think that adolescents should listen to their parents instructions while some argue that they should learn to be on their own. In my opinion, I believe children should depend on their parents until they are mature enough to take decisions.
On the one hand, Adolescents who are staying with their parents should take advice or should follow their opinions. This can help them in choosing a right path, and they can also get some moral support from their family in case if anything went wrong. For example, some of the leading companies CEO’s in their candid interview they often say how they followed their parents and achieved success.
On the other hand, Some millennial just follow their guts and often land in to troubles. During the phase of becoming Adolescents they undergo some many hormonal changes, results in aggressive behavior and decisions that are not healthy for them. For example, according to the crime statistics millennial who don’t listen to their parents are committing more crimes.
In my view, adolescents should not be allowed to take decisions when they reach certain age. For example, in western countries children should take permission from their parents if they want to do anything like part time jobs or for going on excursions until they turn 18. If any child commits a crime the parents are made sole responsible.
To conclude, children should listen to their parents to achieve great success in their life, if they are left to think on their own they end up becoming anti-social elements. So, I believe that until they are physiologically mature they should listen to their parents.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 266, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...e if anything went wrong. For example, some of the leading companies CEO's in their c...
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Line 4, column 211, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...arents if they want to do anything like part time jobs or for going on excursions until t...
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Line 4, column 273, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...going on excursions until they turn 18. If any child commits a crime the parents a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, while, for example, in my opinion, in my view, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1373.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04779411765 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51390757452 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.518382352941 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 406.8 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.1132180119 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.615384615 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9230769231 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.289071896204 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116501684957 0.084324248473 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.069368405091 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18568477298 0.151304729494 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0691734953075 0.056905535591 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.53 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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