Some people believe that the government should apply high taxes to provide good public services for everyone.
Give your opinion.
Tax rates have been always a popular topic of debate since decades. Some people believe that government must increase the tax rates and improve the public services
for betterment of society, while some people believe that they should not increase the tax rates. This essay will discuss why I disagree with government to
burden their citizens by applying high taxes and to focus on the crucial public facilities based on priority.
Public services like education, healthcare, road are dependent on the taxation. High tax rates negatively affects people's financial conditions, especially
the family in which only 1 member is earning and rest all like children, parents are dependent on them. If these people contribute the higher portion of their income
to the government, how would they survive ? Recently, study conducted by British University in India on 1000 families has proved that almost 45% of families are struggling
with low income. So, government should look after these citizens and must not apply high taxes.
Healthcare is considered to be the most important service to the public. Instead of raising taxation for public service improvement, government should focus
and invest more on critical services like healthcare compare to other services. Healthier the people are, better the society is. According to research submitted by scientists
from 12 countries, since last 10 years, the modern lifestyle has negatively impacted the public health with decrease in average life span by 10 years from 70 to 60 years.
Therefore, government must take necessary action to provide advanced healthcare by managing their investments in other services.
This essay discussed how high tax rates will increase difficulties in people lives and why government should prioritize the crucial public services like healthcare.
In my opinion, I believe, government must consider the consequences of higher tax rates and should not increase the taxes.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, so, therefore, while, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1667.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.50165016502 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70081415023 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.57095709571 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 506.7 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.6049624268 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.133333333 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.33333333333 7.06120827912 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 13.0 4.38176352705 297% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.401923107445 0.244688304435 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125166270809 0.084324248473 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101568528501 0.0667982634062 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141689140561 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0896383572131 0.056905535591 158% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.62 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.32 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.