Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or a shortage of money. Others agree that it is better to try and improve such situations.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge.
The dynamics of life makes it a peculiar event such that it is often not a bed of roses. When negative winds blow in life such as having no money or not satisfied with one's work, some intellectuals advice accepting one's fate but others think an attempt should be made to turn such situations around. The two sides will be dilated upon in this essay and a concluding view given.
Naturally, some people have an inherent apathy towards giving their lives a push probably because they have failed in one life pursuits or the other. Such people usually resist any impulse to move forward. For instance, one of my friends who failed a professional examination gave up on his dream of becoming a mechanical engineer and never attempted the examination again. Furthermore, people may find solace in allowing events to take its natural course due to their religious inclinations and are contented. Therefore, it may be tenable for such people to say fate decided their course for them.
Conversely, some school of thoughts think one needs to work hard to change sad situations into positive experiences. For example, if you are not satisfied with a job, you should aspire to secure a more satisfactory and lucrative job. Besides, when people work hard in silence, success will inevitably be their noise. For example, an orange seller in my neighbourhood worked hard to give her two children sound education and is now enjoying the fruits of her labour as her children are presently business moguls in the country. Hence, I agree that one should not just accept negative life's experiences as fate.
In conclusion, although some people opine that unpleasant situations are better accepted probably based on their religious beliefs and an innate reluctance to lift themselves when they fall, I believe it is praiseworthy to try to improve awkward situations to move from penury to wealth and to serve as role models to others in such situations. 325 words
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, conversely, furthermore, hence, if, may, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1628.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 328.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96341463415 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70835373473 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.600609756098 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 525.6 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 78.2541727677 49.4020404114 158% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.285714286 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4285714286 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264960722163 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0744338700053 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0621233955359 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162299535973 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0423517581415 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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