Write about the following topic:
Every country should have a free health service, even if this means that the latest medical treatments may not be available through the service because they are too expensive.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Health is wealth, which is a right for any human being in the society. Although many people say that every country need to provide the health insurance policies to the people with free of cost. I support this statement to a large extent for some reasons.my position is argued further explanation.
Out of all the arguments, the strongest one to prove my view is in these modern days medical technology is improved rapidly compare to olden days. In addition, to cure any diseases doctors are using all the latest tools which are expensive. The common man is unable to effort this much cost. A good example for this is a cancer disease which is required a daily diagnose, laser treatments, keema therapy which are very expensive. Besides this, it’s also true that people need to admit in ICU for long time. By this I mean if people can get some sort of support from Government can help them to get rid of all these health-related issues.
The other reason to prove my point Is the poor people, orphans, the old people who are thrown by kids are really suffering and unable to effort even for their basic needs because their daily income is so less. In addition, the fact that they don’t know about the disease they got as they busy in daily work and getting money for food to surviving. Govt can publish polices based on individual income.
Thus, wrap up the discussion, The Government is people so the government should help the people who are in need. Government can differentiate the budget for critical and basic health checkup. I request government to provide the basic checkup is free for all.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 72, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ght for any human being in the society. Although many people say that every country need...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, if, really, so, thus, i mean, in addition, sort of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1337.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74113475177 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43957456705 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.570921985816 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 411.3 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.4934532989 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.1333333333 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 7.06120827912 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.113362299891 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0380558560725 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0231550421233 0.0667982634062 35% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0714956653516 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0279502569031 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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