Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal.
Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Millions of people are directly affected by the situation of the economy these days. Whereas some authorities argue that the development of the economy is a vital target, other individuals believe that other parts of human society also play an equal role in a certain nation. When it comes to me, I definitely advocate the latter school of thought by discussing both viewpoints of the issue.
To commence with, the progress of the economy is a fundamental background of human prosperity and happiness. Living in wealthy countries means that people are more likely to have a high standard of living including health care, education, and social awareness, rather than a challenging environment in the poor one. Moreover, the process of building a successful business in those developing nations is more reachable than realistic due to the highly competitive capacity of the economy. For example, the new article in Tuoitrenews stated that opening a new business in poor countries is more suffering for an entrepreneur than in developing and rich ones.
In spite of those aforementioned propositions, No matter how rich the nations are, there are always some other aspects that need to concentrate on the same attitude. In fact, the educational system is one of the pivotal factors of a prominent society, which helps reduce criminality and improve social awareness. A rich person without knowledge and morality would certainly harm society in general and other people in particular. Besides, the gap between the rich and the poor also needs to be regulated by the government. In reality, the prosperous economy usually makes the wealthy classes richer and vice versa, ending up with the majority of the population hardly having enough resources to develop their own business.
All in all, if all factors are contemplated, people can easily reach the conclusion that there are other features of the society such as education and equality that are as important as economic progress and need to be focused on. Human life is short, so keep it balanced.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2022-02-27 | quytnee | 61 | view |
| 2022-02-12 | Awadhesh Mourya | 78 | view |
| 2021-12-27 | manu_kaur113 | 73 | view |
| 2021-12-27 | Chuoidawy | 89 | view |
| 2021-11-17 | Nguyễn Thị Phương Huỳnh | 84 | view |
- In recent years there has been growing interest in the relationship between equality and personal achievement Some people believe that individuals can achieve more in egalitarian societies Others believe that high levels of personal achievement are possib 78
- Is it a good idea to have a pet with a newborn Give both views opinion 89
- Some people believe that school children should not be given homework be their teachers whereas others argue that homework plays an important role in the education of children Discuss both views and give your own opinion 79
- There are many different types of music in the world today Why do we need music Is the traditional music of a country more important than the international music that is heard everywhere nowadays 80
- Some people think that governments should give financial support to creative artists such as painters and musicians Others believe that creative artists should be funded by alternative sources Discuss both views and give your own opinion 89
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, if, moreover, so, whereas, for example, in fact, in general, in particular, such as, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1718.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 334.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14371257485 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.848053007 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580838323353 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 566.1 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.9477759733 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.714285714 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8571428571 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.92857142857 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160359616476 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0451611883706 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0389585860174 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.093720029398 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0319609681536 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.36 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.