Some people believe school children should be given multiple short vacations, while others believe they should get one long vacation. Give the advantages of both and express your own point of view.
It is often argued that learning institutions or elementary schools should offer on extended or multiple small session breaks. As per my opinion and understanding, I believe there should be multiple short vacations in curriculum and I will try to ensure through my essay that i am able to make a significant impression.
I believe organised and well-defined frequent breaks keep the motivation factor high along with enough time for them to practice and revise. It will also reduce the burden of completing the full course at once which will again ensure that students are able to understand the content to the depth and able to implement the concept to a greater extent.
However, there seems to be a downside of multiple breaks too which can be finishing the course in given amount of time, this sounds like an advantage for one long break which give surplus period to finish the course in time. Another major advantage of single long break can be that continuity of learning attitude among the students will remain intact, which might be a compromising factor of multiple breaks.
To conclude with above data points, I am in favour of more than one study breaks as it seems student can grasp and develop their personality to a comparative level.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 277, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ill try to ensure through my essay that i am able to make a significant impressio...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1047.0 1615.20841683 65% => OK
No of words: 213.0 315.596192385 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91549295775 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67064769294 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.600938967136 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 329.4 506.74238477 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 33.0497460548 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 149.571428571 106.682146367 140% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.4285714286 20.7667163134 147% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.85714285714 7.06120827912 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176206190176 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.077908430452 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0521985206651 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0931027696442 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0710335141096 0.056905535591 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 13.0946893788 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.49 50.2224549098 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.85 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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