Some people fail in school, but end up being successful in life. Why do you think that is the case? What is the most important to thing in succeed in life?
It is a fact that there are many factors which makes a person successful and the primary pioneer of this begins with good education.Schools play most important role in developing a person as an individual. Though,many concepts that have been taught,all may not be useful to our future lives depending upon chosen carriers.Here we will discuss that in spite of having many positive points,achieving good grade in early education doesn't define your future success.
Firstly,there are many carriers which do need good score.Few examples are,admission in medical,top management institute,pharmacy,overseas studies etc. To get into these fields,one has to do beyond average. Though, it does not give guarantee of success because after getting into it many students fail due to study pressure,lack of understanding the subjects,difficulties while performing practical and so on.
On the other hand,grades do help as they are one of the primary factors to recruit an employee in a top firm.Hence, the chances of having a successful career increase if a person has done well in college. For example,if someone has passed from any college with a distinction and if another student has passed with same grades from a good recognised college like IIT,IIM,FMS,NIT chances of selection becomes much more higher.But people who have more practical knowledge and thorough understanding are prone to succeed more than a person with only a good score but lack of dealing with real problems in a practical way.
In Conclusion,I would say that most important thing to succeed in life is a thorough understanding ,a positive and practical approach, dedication and a self-confidence.That is why see many persons who failed at initial stage,leading successful lives.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2021-07-26 | SKN | 67 | view |
| 2018-02-02 | noorali.bhayani@srb.gos.pk | 76 | view |
- You recently went to a public event for example an exhibition festival or show that you think your friend would enjoy Write a letter to friend In your letter tell your friend what the event was explain why you think your friend would like the event invite 78
- Some people think that modern technology is making people more sociable while others think it is making them less sociable Discuss both views and give your opinion 84
- If an individual acts in an anti social way such as committing a crime then society is blamed for such behavior What are the causes behind such behavior Who should be responsible for this 84
- You have a spare room in your flat or apartment and you want to rent it to a student Write a letter to the director of the accommodation office at the local college In your letter Explain where your apartment is Describe the room What kind of person would 73
- Scientist and technology experts seem to be more valued by modern society than musicians and artist To what extent do you agree 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 133, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Schools
...neer of this begins with good education.Schools play most important role in developing ...
^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 213, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , many
...loping a person as an individual. Though,many concepts that have been taught,all may ...
^^^^^
Line 1, column 249, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , all
...ough,many concepts that have been taught,all may not be useful to our future lives d...
^^^^
Line 1, column 323, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Here
...re lives depending upon chosen carriers.Here we will discuss that in spite of having...
^^^^
Line 1, column 388, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , achieving
... in spite of having many positive points,achieving good grade in early education doesnt de...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 429, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...achieving good grade in early education doesnt define your future success. Firstly,...
^^^^^^
Line 1, column 464, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...tion doesnt define your future success. Firstly,there are many carriers which do...
^^^
Line 2, column 8, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , there
...t define your future success. Firstly,there are many carriers which do need good sc...
^^^^^^
Line 2, column 58, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Few
... many carriers which do need good score.Few examples are,admission in medical,top m...
^^^
Line 2, column 74, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , admission
...hich do need good score.Few examples are,admission in medical,top management institute,pha...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 95, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , top
...re.Few examples are,admission in medical,top management institute,pharmacy,overseas ...
^^^^
Line 2, column 120, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , pharmacy
...sion in medical,top management institute,pharmacy,overseas studies etc. To get into these...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 176, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , one
...as studies etc. To get into these fields,one has to do beyond average. Though, it do...
^^^^
Line 2, column 323, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , lack
...many students fail due to study pressure,lack of understanding the subjects,difficult...
^^^^^
Line 2, column 358, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , difficulties
...ssure,lack of understanding the subjects,difficulties while performing practical and so on. ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 18, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , grades
...practical and so on. On the other hand,grades do help as they are one of the primary ...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 110, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Hence
...rs to recruit an employee in a top firm.Hence, the chances of having a successful car...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 217, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , if
...on has done well in college. For example,if someone has passed from any college wit...
^^^
Line 3, column 326, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ther student has passed with same grades from a good recognised college like IIT,...
^^
Line 3, column 367, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , IIM
... from a good recognised college like IIT,IIM,FMS,NIT chances of selection becomes mu...
^^^^
Line 3, column 375, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , NIT
...good recognised college like IIT,IIM,FMS,NIT chances of selection becomes much more ...
^^^^
Line 3, column 414, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'higher' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: higher
...S,NIT chances of selection becomes much more higher.But people who have more practical know...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 426, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: But
...s of selection becomes much more higher.But people who have more practical knowledg...
^^^
Line 3, column 497, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...cal knowledge and thorough understanding are prone to succeed more than a person ...
^^
Line 3, column 601, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a practical way" with adverb for "practical"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
... but lack of dealing with real problems in a practical way. In Conclusion,I would say that most ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 14, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , I
...lems in a practical way. In Conclusion,I would say that most important thing to ...
^^
Line 4, column 99, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ceed in life is a thorough understanding ,a positive and practical approach, dedic...
^^
Line 4, column 169, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: That
...roach, dedication and a self-confidence.That is why see many persons who failed at i...
^^^^
Line 4, column 225, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , leading
...many persons who failed at initial stage,leading successful lives.
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, hence, if, may, so, well, while, as to, for example, in conclusion, in spite of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1474.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39926739927 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.64954670984 2.80592935109 130% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.626373626374 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 460.8 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 20.2975951904 168% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 95.5345977905 49.4020404114 193% => OK
Chars per sentence: 184.25 106.682146367 173% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.125 20.7667163134 164% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.875 7.06120827912 211% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 29.0 5.01903807615 578% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152904113762 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.066589792406 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.062870796937 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101173091895 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0720588964253 0.056905535591 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.1 13.0946893788 161% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 28.51 50.2224549098 57% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.7 11.3001002004 157% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.63 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.49 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.1190380762 154% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.