Some people feel that entertainers ( e.g. film stars, musicians or sports stars) are paid too much money. Do you agree or disagree? What other jobs should be paid highly?
Popular identities like a sports player, musicians, and film celebrities received a huge amount of incomes is believed by some individuals. I agree and believe that they are the representative of a country in their particular field, therefore, they should receive high salaries. In addition to that, medical researchers must receive good financial support from the federal agency.
Popular individuals are paid high salaries because they represent the nation on an international level, therefore these individuals should be paid enough wages so that they can focus on their jobs and responsibility only. For instance, a cricket player in world cup tournaments is expected to give a maximum contribution in competitions rather than worrying other needs of his daily life, thus these individuals are highly paid to focus in-game only. For that reason, authorities take care of their other requirements.
Doctors and scientists are other individuals who should be paid high income because they are the live savers in the world and their jobs cannot be done anyone else. Doctors and scientists spend many years in the discovery of medicines against deadly infections to save mankind, thus they deserve to get highly paid. A survey conducted by a medical association in India revealed that since the invention of TB medicine, around 2 lakh people have been treated so far in India only. Hence, these individuals must be supported financially by the government to let them pay attention to their career only.
In conclusion, I believe that these popular individuals deserve financial assistance and also medical inventors should also be aided in terms of financial needs.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 27, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
Popular identities like a sports player, musicians, and film celebrities...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, so, therefore, thus, for instance, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1411.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3446969697 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91246007157 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.587121212121 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 447.3 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.7880223067 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.272727273 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.54545454545 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197933186793 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0731834134285 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0564956859353 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111051612638 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0464345638031 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.99 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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