Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things that we really do not need. Others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives.
Which viewpoint do you agree with?
Advertisement plays a vital role in today’s world for marketing a product. Few people believe that we buy things which are mostly unnecessary by looking at the advertisements only. While others argue that we can buy latest products by advertisements which can be useful and beneficial for us. I strongly believe that the former is more appropriate as explained.
Companies sell the products and their new features by advertising only. There may be new features added to the existing products which can improve our lives. For example, a new car model may have a better break system, it may come with more secure accidental system or it might come with economical petrol usage. Therefore, products features need to be advertised which might b beneficial in our day to day lives.
To promote products, companies only emphasize on the brighter side of the products and show their benefits. Mostly, people do not research on the product and rely only on its advertisement. Therefore, end up in buying things which they do not need. For instance, few products are herbal tea for weight loss, height increasing soles and waist trimming belts. A recent study in Pakistan, suggested that there has been an increase in these products in a past decade by telemarketing. Whereas, health experts suggest that losing weight solemnly rely on diet and exercise. Moreover, herbal products and height increasing sole can negatively effect on person’s hormones and create more problems in future. Therefore, advertisement creates an impression of positivity of product which leads to unnecessarily purchasing.
People just look for the advertisement only and end up in pile of unnecessary products. . In my opinion, advertisements show the positive aspects of the products, hence people tend to buy what they really do not need. Therefore, they should work out before buying any product, look for the reviews and think twice before buying either they really need it or it is just a scam.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'buy the latest'.
Suggestion: buy the latest
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Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...end up in pile of unnecessary products. . In my opinion, advertisements show the ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, look, may, moreover, really, so, therefore, whereas, while, for example, for instance, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1667.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 322.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17701863354 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93348840393 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.549689440994 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 513.9 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.1969323673 49.4020404114 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 87.7368421053 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9473684211 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.63157894737 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.334505585015 0.244688304435 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104350188423 0.084324248473 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0744773494933 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.2007510154 0.151304729494 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0422793577898 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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