In some countries, even though the rates of serious crimes are decreasing, people feel less safe than ever before.What do you think are the causes of this problem and what measures could be taken to
solve it?
Although the grievous crime rates are declining in some of the nations of the world, the citizens are feeling more insecure than before. This essay will suggest the main reason for this issue is that the fear of these severe crimes still exists in their minds, however, to tackle this problem the stringent measure would be an awareness campaign to educate them.
The primary reason for the people to feel less safe than before instead of the decrement of crime rates is that they are frightened of the occurrence of any sort of severe crime again. This is to say that when they are out with their family and friends, if they see tight security, unintentionally they try to avoid these places. As a result, the inner instinct makes them feel not safer than before even though these incidents are reducing. For example, it is reported that during the year 2018-2019, in Telanagana 75% of women were afraid to go out in the evenings because of 1 gang-rape incident in their region.
A long-term solution to the predicament is to launch an awareness campaign informing people that violent crimes have reduced. The concerned authorities especially the police department should assure the public by using media as their tool and make them aware that criminals are behind bars. Besides, they should show the masses that government officials are doing a lot to prevent major crimes in the nation. Hence these initiatives can remove the fear among the people of being not safer. In Japan, for instance, when a similar initiative was carried out the people were feeling more secure enough than before.
In conclusion, in spite of the major crimes getting decreased in some states, people are feeling quite unsafe when compared to before. The main reason is that these incidences have occupied their minds to a large extent and the most practical solution is educating them by launching public campaigns.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...e grievous crime rates are declining in some of the nations of the world, the citizens are ...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
... to prevent major crimes in the nation. Hence these initiatives can remove the fear a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, hence, however, if, so, still, for example, for instance, in conclusion, sort of, as a result, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1590.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96875 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44792641842 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553125 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 499.5 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.9564167476 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.307692308 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6153846154 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.84615384615 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221748803243 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.079892310023 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0610189848458 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136833347131 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0436140306913 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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