Some people say the main way to be happy in life is to have a lot of money.
How might having a lot of money make people happy?
What other things in life can make people happy?
Happiness varies with the perspective of a person. Some believe that having a hefty amount of money is the key to happiness; however, others believe that there are certain things such as health which can bring happiness to people's lives. This essay will discuss although wealth can make us feel contented, yet without a healthy body, it is of no use to anyone.
It cannot be denied that in this money-oriented society in recent times, we are living in a materialistic world. If we want to fulfil our ambitions, we must be rich enough to buy that materialistic happiness. This, whether it is to have a good education or to pursue any hobby, one needs a large amount of money. In sharp contrast, a poor man would not be happy since he is struggling to pay his daily expenses.
Nevertheless, it is a well-known fact that health is a person's biggest asset. Instead of having an infinite amount of dollars, a bedridden millionaire has to have to lose his life, unfortunately, to cancer because even the expensive treatments were not able to save him. Hence, a person with a healthier body is much happier than the one who is suffering from any fatal diseases.
In conclusion, contentedness lies in the individual's needs. This is to say that, a poor person will link happiness directly to enormous money whereas the one fighting with his unhealthy body, link it to a perfectly healthy body. Hence, it might be a misconception to attach only wealth with a contented life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 54, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a person' or simply 'persons'?
Suggestion: a person; persons
... it is a well-known fact that health is a persons biggest asset. Instead of having an inf...
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Line 5, column 56, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'persons the biggest'.
Suggestion: persons the biggest
...t is a well-known fact that health is a persons biggest asset. Instead of having an infinite am...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, nevertheless, so, well, whereas, as to, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1218.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7578125 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86452533085 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6171875 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 382.5 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.5512348754 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.6923076923 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6923076923 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.30769230769 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269846921379 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0760119911886 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0704636506493 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146968427925 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0767241396182 0.056905535591 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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