Some people say that now we can see films on our phones or tablets there is no need to go to the cinema. Others say that to be fully enjoyed, films need to be seen in a cinema.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
With the development of technology, watching movies on devices has become a popular choice for many people, while some argue that it is more entertaining to watch movies in the cinema. Although both the options are equally entertaining, I believe watching on our personal devices is more convenient.
The flexibility of being able to enjoy movies on our personal devices has many benefits. Firstly, there is no time or place restriction has to when and where a movie is seen. Secondly, a movie can be paused at anytime and can be resumed at convenience. Any scene can be replayed and viewed over and over again. For example, while commuting to and from work, on a bus or train, a person can enjoy movie. Moreover, one of the biggest advantage is that it saves the money paid for tickets and snacks.
However, going to the cinema has its own perks. One advantage is that a film can be enjoyed on a larger screen and even the smallest detail is clearly visible to the eye. For instance, a shadow lurking in the dark background may go unnoticed in small devices but on screen it is quite evident. Another advantage is that it allows people to get away from their home and work environment and enjoy some interruption free entertainment.
To sum up, there are several choices of watching a movie in a device or in a cinema and the preferences vary for each person, but clearly the conveniences of watching on a device outweighs the comfort of cinema.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, while, as to, for example, for instance, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1200.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.6875 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71636928811 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.546875 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 392.4 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.0767918087 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.3076923077 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6923076923 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181329011449 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0674660929549 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0434413311459 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102790399526 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0395032502807 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.