some people think that art is an essential subject for children at school while others think it is a waste of time
Based on the topic given we have to derive whether art is an essential subject for children at school or it is a waste of time. Let us now discuss the advantages and disadvantages of studying art at school briefly below.
art is necessary for children at school because it cultivates the vision and thinking capacity of children to a greater extent.The children could understand what creativity is and they can improve further.For example if a teacher asks child to sketch a portrait, children would draw different paintings on their own perspective.Each ideas will be unique. A person with good art skill can think beyond the box and focus on new learnings. art gives not only knowledge but also inner peace. art is a form of expressing your vision in a chart or a paper. Though it doesn't seem real, your inner conscience feels surreal on seeing your ideas transforming into something wonderful which makes you more happier than never before.
On the other hand art alone cannot help a student to become successful in life.Some children concentrate only on art without focusing on studies which is not advisable.Moreover we can't see all people who are interested in art succeeded in their career.Most of the people feel that art is of no use because not many people flourish on choosing art as their career.Moreover only few artists earn to their expectations.art involves lot of patience and many people fail as they lose it at some point of time.
art can be successful only if the child is more passionate and want to take as the primary goal or else he or she would be a loser in their life.though art improves latency abilities it does not provide knowledge on how to lead forward in life.I would like to conclude by stressing on the fact art is not as much necessary to children during school days rather art can treated as a recreational subject during leisure hours to reduce the stress among children.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, briefly, but, if, moreover, so, for example, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1616.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 332.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86746987952 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86558831404 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578313253012 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 487.8 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 36.0 20.2975951904 177% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 168.726895995 49.4020404114 342% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 179.555555556 106.682146367 168% => OK
Words per sentence: 36.8888888889 20.7667163134 178% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.55555555556 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.01903807615 339% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.376299363015 0.244688304435 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.14186691078 0.084324248473 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.114880107013 0.0667982634062 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.222330493182 0.151304729494 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0867836887274 0.056905535591 153% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.0 13.0946893788 153% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.4 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.3001002004 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.56 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.4 10.1190380762 162% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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