Some people think that children should go to kindergarten before attending primary school, while others believe that is better for children to stay all day with their families. Discuss both views and give yoir own opinion.
There are two different attitudes towards the importance of going to kindergarten for children. Some believe that attending kindergarten is necessary for children. However, this issue is not entirely straightforward and arguments can also be made against the idea. This essay will discuss the debate and give a concluding view.
On the one hand, those who support the kindergartens as one of the most important levels of education cite the various benefits. These range from the growth of social personality to learning some of the academic subjects. Children who have the chance to attend kindergarten could learn how to cooperate with their peers in a group. In a group game, for instance, they would learn how to help teammates and how to encourage them to do their best. These skills are totally adventitious that should be flourished in the earlier ages. In addition, another argument is to become acquainted with some basic subjects such as the alphabet and the numbers which are essential requirements for primary school. hence, children could go to school with a sufficient confidence.
By contrast, opponents of this viewpoint incline to the belief that kindergartens cannot be completely helpful for some reasons. Firstly, they believe that students would be excessively busy to the extent that they could not spend time with their families. Thus, it is better they enjoy all day long in their homes before primary school. Moreover, it must be said that the payments for nursery school are an additional household expenditure which could put families under severe financial pressure, particularly low-income families. If it is important to prepare children before school, they should be taught with the help of educational comic books by their parents at home.
Overall, it seems obvious that although going to kindergarten would be beneficial in some aspects, it won't have major effects on their future education.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: some
...rowth of social personality to learning some of the academic subjects. Children who have th...
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Suggestion: Hence
...ential requirements for primary school. hence, children could go to school with a suf...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, hence, however, if, moreover, so, thus, for instance, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1628.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28571428571 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8297014546 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590909090909 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 495.0 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.4424939229 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.7647058824 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1176470588 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.64705882353 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.347523482996 0.244688304435 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114760393382 0.084324248473 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0856795145286 0.0667982634062 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.196795776166 0.151304729494 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0633339702072 0.056905535591 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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