Some people think that environmental problems should be solved on a global scale while others believe it is better to deal with them nationally. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
Urbanization and modernization of both prosperous and developing countries had given birth to environmental crisis. Floods, wildfires, tornados, tsunami are now frequent visitors to almost every continent on the globe and the impact is universal. From the wildfires of Australia to California, tornados in Atlantic to Pacific in Indonesia, the impact of their occurrence has devastating impact to overall ecology. This essay will discuss why global attention needed along with the support from each nation to solve these environmental menace.
Firstly, tsunami is the most recent environmental phenomenon which impacts not only flora and fauna but millions of species living on land and undersea. The impact is at global scale and not restricted to specific isolations of countries. For example, 2014 was one of the worst year in the history of mankind where frequent volcano eruption in Asia Pacific tending to tsunami destroyed the entire plantation in eastern part of globe. These events are unfortunate and needs attention at global scale with every country allocating some funds to investigate and support the region thus impacted.
Secondly, calamities like wildfires are the results of the reckless and selfish behavior of the local communities within the countries. It impacts not only local ecology but had a cascading impact compounding to overall environment. For example, Californian wildfire in year 2019 was the result of some individual celebrating the graduation ceremony with bonfire in woods. Lack of strong regulations from local governing national authorities resulted these unfortunate events.
In conclusion , Environmental problems needs attention at both global scale and national level. For instance, global warming needs global support but wildfires tend be resolved by local national polices. It is recommended to form of environmental committee to segregate the responsibilities to global level vis-à-vis country specific as long term solution.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, thus, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1691.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.73220338983 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03389476412 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.579661016949 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 532.8 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.6486087363 49.4020404114 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.733333333 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6666666667 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.2 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179355571429 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0645882902139 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0659322069817 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112840426988 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0509768548316 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.95 12.4159519038 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.04 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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