Some people think that hosting an international sports event is good for the country, while some people think it is bad. Discuss both views and state your opinion. Give reason for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
I completely agree that to be the host of an international sports event bring a lot of benefits for the hold nation.
Practically, international sports event is a big occasion that every country around the world have competition in large of aspects especially in sports. However, to be the host of this event, one country need meeting a lot of requirements involving facilities, equipment, etc. Because of these reasons, the hold-country have to pay full attention and make a strong effort to improve their facilities. Bides, they have an opportunity to gain more new knowledge about organization, allocating their resource, so on. Thanks for it, the media platform will transmit their own tradition and cultures. On the other hand, foreign friends have chance to learn more about this country about people, culture, technology or methods. Taking Vietnamese as an example, in 2008 Vietnam became the host of World Cup. Through this game, people around the world know more about our country from the people living, culture and tradition to the national spirit always flooding in each Vietnamese person. Thank for this, the world have a different assessment and evaluation about Vietnam, it has been not a low-modern country or nation with property and war, absolutely it has transformed its outside and become more modern, beautiful and valuable.
However, this journey is an challenge. It take a lot of time, money, power and effort of the government in general and the local people in particular. No matter what the difficult problems are, the advantages come from this occasion is larger and more important. It helps to change old mindset of someone about some countries, empower the country always make a breakthrough and development.
I believe that all countries always desire to become the host of some big events and they are making effort day by day to make this dream come true. Moreover, the country which has the break to become the host always appreciate because of the changing and promoting.
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- Some people think that hosting an international sports event is good for the country while some people think it is bad Discuss both views and state your opinion Give reason for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or exper 78
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, so, in general, in particular, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1679.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 330.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08787878788 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7564783031 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.563636363636 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 520.2 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.08160047 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.9375 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.625 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.4375 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164758182097 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0566815597404 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0341435367567 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111156826392 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0315578817321 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.