Some people think it is better to choose friends who always have the same opinion as them. Other people believe it is good to have friends who sometimes disagree with them.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Friendship is something that indispensable in people’s life. However, people find it is difficult to choose friends who can benefit for their growth. In my point of view, both the friend who has same favor with you or the one who always has something different point with you can bring benefit to you.
On the one hand, the friends who have same opinion with you can always make you comfortable and easy. Therefore, find such a soulmate is a beautiful journey that you can bring on together. You will concentrate both your target and achieve it when you working together, thus the whole process will come with efficiency. However, the drawback of such companion may easy follow your incorrect decisions and approach in vain.
On the other hand, seeking your friends whose opinion are something different with you can bring you some brilliant new ideas, Which can makes your life more colourful and exciting. Further more, the people with different opinion with you can find your mistakes with easy because he or her will not follow your ideas. Unfortunately, sometimes, such friends may obstruct you when your have divert in opinion and make you feel uneasy, or even make it longer than usual to approach your targets.
In conclusion, People may find friends with same opinion or habits more easily than find friend with opposite views. However, in my opinion, Perhaps we find friends with different opinion may truly realize your potential and approach huge success to all.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, so, therefore, thus, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1247.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 248.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02822580645 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46631507874 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 176.041082164 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 369.0 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.2136871572 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.916666667 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6666666667 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.16666666667 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.297069184301 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.132407286352 0.084324248473 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0775987341363 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.209488835073 0.151304729494 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.038504552817 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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