Some people think it’s better to choose friends who always have the same opinions as them. Others believe that it’s good to have friends who sometimes disagree with them. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Some people think it’s better to choose friends who always have the same opinions as them. Others believe that it’s good to have friends who sometimes disagree with them. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
friend is someone who always stand by other friend. To make what kind of friend is completely a personal choice. Some people like to have friends who agree with them in every decision while others prefer to make companions who sometimes give their own suggestion which may be altogether different. However, I will discuss about both in following paragraphs.
Firstly, I will discuss about those who think it’s better to make friends who have same opinion as of them. Actually, people find it quite comfortable and supportive when another person also agree for the same thing. They feel more confident for doing a particular task. For instance, many times a situation occur in everyone’s life when he/she is in dilemma as to whether he/she should choose a particular option or not. So, at that time when someone close to him/her gives the consent that whatever he/she is thinking is right, it gives an assurance to the concerned person to go with that option.
Nevertheless, there are few people who believe it is better to have a companion who come up with different approach because it is not necessary that each and every decision taken by someone will always be right. It is quite possible that there happens a situation where a person have less knowledge about anything. In that scenario, it would be great if we take help from someone who is well versed in that field. In other words, a friend should be a critic too which can show the right path whenever need arises. In this way, right and timely decision can be made.
To recapitulate, its best to have a friend with different opinion as it is essential to see each and every aspect which sometimes may not come in one mind. Accordingly, in my opinion, one should make a friend who does not hesitate to come forward with his own opinion. (320 words)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 2, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Friend
friend is someone who always stand by other fr...
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Line 3, column 360, Rule ID: WHETHER[6]
Message: Can you shorten this phrase to just 'whether', or rephrase the sentence to avoid "as to"?
Suggestion: whether
...eryone’s life when he/she is in dilemma as to whether he/she should choose a particular optio...
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Line 5, column 515, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ow the right path whenever need arises. In this way, right and timely decision can...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, actually, also, first, firstly, however, if, may, nevertheless, so, well, while, as to, for instance, kind of, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 23.0 7.30460921844 315% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1504.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74447949527 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49702028638 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.558359621451 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 475.2 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.9223458055 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.0 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8125 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5625 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.402210577396 0.244688304435 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113410466012 0.084324248473 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.119420727455 0.0667982634062 179% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.234183535078 0.151304729494 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0677516182256 0.056905535591 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.27 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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