Some people think the money spent on developing technology for space exploration is not justified. There are more beneficial ways to spend this money. Do you agree or disagree?
In recent times, huge budgets are invested in space research and development. While some people opine that it is a waste of resources and there are more effective ways to spend these funds, I agree that every penny spent on space exploration is worth the investment and is justifiable. The following paragraphs will discuss how space exploration has touched mankind in more ways than one.
To begin with, space exploration has contributed immensely in developing human’s civilization. It is difficult to accomplish some of our daily routines without the intervention of space research. An illustration is the notable invention of GPS and location services on our mobile phones that are connected to the navigation satellites in space. These two crucial tools have been widely adopted by the society in finding the fastest routes to our destinations or traffic updates. Additionally, another spin off from space exploration is the weather forecast app. For these reasons, space studying is not a drain on the country’s economy.
What’s more, space development is beneficial to the healthcare system as it helps to broaden our knowledge about the human body. Scientists carry out study of different planets to discover resources that provide for earth’s life. A perfect example is gravity that affects the astronaut during space travel. These effects are studied in relation to existing diseases like cardiovascular and diabetes including the drugs that are used to cure the diseases.
In a nutshell, although space development and travel is a costly venture and a risky one at that. its benefits outweigh its drawbacks. Also, sufficient care must be taken to ensure that other areas of the sectors are not completely abandoned in a bid to explore space.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...iseases like cardiovascular and diabetes including the drugs that are used to cur...
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Suggestion: Its
...costly venture and a risky one at that. its benefits outweigh its drawbacks. Also, ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, while, as to, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1492.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29078014184 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91277036093 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.63829787234 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 477.9 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.7225204984 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.25 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.625 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.875 7.06120827912 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239189394529 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0705751509168 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0641574048781 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137062223977 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0675372440481 0.056905535591 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.86 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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