Some people think that parents should teach their children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the best place to learn this. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
A significant number of individuals believe that guardian should educate their pupils on how to be good members of society, although, others consider that an educational institute is the most suitable location to absorb such skills. This essay will discuss both the views followed by an opinion.
Children are the future generations of the family, thus it becomes necessary for the parent to teach their children about manners, etiquette as they carry that legacy to the next. For instance, worshipping of Hindu goddess Laxmi Mata is followed in northern India during Deepawali festival, therefore this should be followed to keep this religious activity alive to many generations and parent involvement in this is most important as children and parent belong to the same religion.
Teachers are considered the most qualified educators, as they are professional and trained for that purpose. Hence, teaching good manners in schools can be highly effective. Mostly all students listen to their teachers in the classroom and follow discipline during learning practices, thus educating how to be the good members of society can be easily achieved in the school environment. For instance, a recent survey from the School education board has revealed that 70 per cent of students learn good manners in school and remember it for a lifetime.
In conclusion, while mentors are professional in teaching thus skills, I believe that parent is more close to their children and they know them more thoroughly than any other individual, therefore they should take responsibility of teaching good member skills of society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, so, therefore, thus, while, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1364.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34901960784 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78296017915 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.576470588235 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 418.5 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 81.6224370025 49.4020404114 165% => OK
Chars per sentence: 151.555555556 106.682146367 142% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.3333333333 20.7667163134 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.33240704593 0.244688304435 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.134241879933 0.084324248473 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0576685829818 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.194236301235 0.151304729494 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0316864258319 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.9 13.0946893788 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.05 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.67 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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