Being success in sport has always been argued that physical strength is outweight than mental strength, while some people said otherwise. However, both are necessary to reach exercise goal.
Physical stregth is really needed for doing exercise. With a weak body, people cannot strugle to complete whole steps that are needed to finish the exercise. Therefore, in reaching goal for sport, everyone is required to do daily routine exercise and supported by comsuming helathy food which contains vitamine, nutrient, fibre etc. All of these are needed to improve endurance in physical stength.
However, mental streght is the same useful for sport. People in doing exercise especially in reaching target, they should have spirit and motivation. by setting goal in their mind will help them to be focuse and and have a goal mindset. With goal mindset, they will become stuburn and never give up until they complete the exercise.
In conclusion, either physical stregth or mental strength does not outweght each other, while both are have the same essential role to gain success in sport.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 151, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: By
...they should have spirit and motivation. by setting goal in their mind will help th...
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Line 5, column 209, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: and
... their mind will help them to be focuse and and have a goal mindset. With goal mindset,...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'had'.
Suggestion: had
...not outweght each other, while both are have the same essential role to gain success...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, really, so, therefore, while, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 917.0 1615.20841683 57% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 175.0 315.596192385 55% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63713576256 4.20363070211 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36746656981 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 176.041082164 63% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.634285714286 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 276.3 506.74238477 55% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.7939794618 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.3636363636 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9090909091 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.72727272727 7.06120827912 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246242927486 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0906459865187 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0954703710028 0.0667982634062 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173654713901 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0961637876971 0.056905535591 169% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 78.4519038076 50% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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