Farming is the backbone of every country but nowadays many youngsters hesitate to enter in this profession.
Why is this the case and what can be done to avoid it?
Unfortunately, today, young adults do not have any intention to go farming. However, farming is one of the most essential professions for every country. In the following, it will be discussed why youngsters avoid choosing this occupation. Moreover, two recommendations will be suggested to encourage them to enter it.
As for some reasons, firstly, farming is a laborious and time- consuming work. In fact, farmers have to spend more time almost eight to twelve hours on the farmland to perform various work including, cultivating and watering their crops. Undoubtedly, performing such laboring works can physically drain their energy. In addition, in most cases, especially in developing countries, farmers are not able to gain reasonable profit. To explain clearly, farmers usually sell their agricultural products with a low price to fruit dealers and then they offer fruits and vegetables with high price in the market.
Two main approaches can entice youngsters to engage this occupation. Firstly, they should utilize modern machines and techniques for farming. As a matter of fact, nowadays, a wide range of developed agricultural machines have been created that can make farming more comfortable and efficient. Furthermore, authorities should support farmers to gain suitable profit. For instance, they should assign some regulations for dealers to purchase farmers’ products at suitable prices.
To conclude, youngsters are not interested to enter a farming job as they feel not only it is quite laborious, it would not be lucrative and profitable. However, the governments can support them to facilitate their land with modern machines to ease farming and assist them to increase their income.
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...getables with high price in the market. Two main approaches can entice youngster...
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...d assist them to increase their income.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, however, moreover, so, then, as for, for instance, in addition, in fact, as a matter of fact, in most cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1447.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.50190114068 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95950882375 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.600760456274 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 439.2 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.670620052 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.4375 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4375 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172787849246 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.05949088001 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0757583894763 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11512103628 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0775736030005 0.056905535591 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.32 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.29 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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