Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged. Others believe that children who are taught to co-operate rather than compete become more useful adults.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion
Nowadays there are different branches in human development that specialise in child rearing and upbringing .one of the most debated issues in this branch either to get the child used to compete over his capabilities and needs in life or have the feeling and responsibility of co-operation. I think that both characters are needed in different situations of life according to the state being dealt with. Let's discuss both views in the upcoming lines.
On one hand regarding the co-operation, We humans have the instinct of giving hands to whoever needs help. Not only that it raises the personal capability of team working but also, the net product of ten persons' brainstorming, for example, will be much more panoramic than a single individual's reasoning. However this does not exempt that sometimes the situation got worse especially when there is a conflict of interest between the team members cooperating to accomplish a certain mission, that will delay its accomplishment as consequence.
On the other hand on mentioning competition, it is thought by many professionals in positive upbringing discipline that it is a significant trait that the child got used to its concept in a right way as it urges the child to do his best whatever the obstacles that have confronted him. Additionally, the feeling of continuous competition when placed in a suitable context would bring the best version of one's self. Lastly, competition should be implemented in a way that omits the sensation of envy between children in a class or wherever they are.
To sum up, every trait has its own pros and cons and it is best to apply each in the suitable situation to bring the best of our precious offspring and upcoming generations.
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also, but, however, if, lastly, regarding, so, for example, i think, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1442.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0243902439 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9940878261 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595818815331 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 441.0 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 76.4503106599 49.4020404114 155% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.2 106.682146367 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.7 20.7667163134 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.7 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.141367423593 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0565081080682 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0416927178634 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0713788083185 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0369976789951 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.0946893788 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 50.2224549098 103% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.43 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.43 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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