Some people think that watching TV programs can help children's development while others disagree. What is your opinon?
The young generation in the modern era prefers to watch television in their free time. However, whether tv shows have a positive or negative impact on a child, has always been a controversial issue. A part of the population believes that viewing television can foster in child's mental growth whereas others deny this argument. In my opinion, TV program does not aid in a child's development and this essay will cite reasons to advocate my argument.
In recent years, many production units have introduced TV programs which they claim to help develop a child's creativity as well as an intellectual side. In addition, some people believe that watching cartoons and other kid's programs can not only imbibe emotional intelligence but also introduce them to a skill such as teamwork. For example, they state that the characters from cartoon series or kids sports show can assist in inculcating those skills. This argument can be agreed upon to some level but there are innumerable other factors associated with TV programs that hamper child development.
Children cannot put a check on themselves watching daily shows which hampers their physical growth as well as has a detrimental impact on their mental health. If a child is unattended, he might watch television for hours without doing any physical activity leading to a sedentary lifestyle which has a negative impact on their growth. Although, some TV programs aid in bestowing useful skills and traits, implementing those teachings are crucial. Thus, playing outdoor games and participating in team-building activities with other children can boost children's development rather than watching television.
To conclude, even though some TV programs try to teach skills which can be beneficial for child development, it is not useful unless implemented practically. Henceforth, TV program does not foster children development in my opinion.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 153, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, so, thus, well, whereas, for example, in addition, such as, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1593.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32775919732 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8960198195 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602006688963 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 477.0 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.2547011021 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.785714286 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3571428571 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.28571428571 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.303217473537 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108566472995 0.084324248473 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0641913381405 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.195322856674 0.151304729494 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0498115375775 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.11 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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