Some people like to travel outside their country. Others would rather travel to tourist spots in their own country first, before traveling abroad. Which do you prefer to do and why? Include specific details and examples to support your choice.
Undeniably, traveling is becoming a crucial part of excellent lifestyle and tourism has become a billion dollar industry. Whilst some tourists explore their own nation before stepping abroad, I would completely agree with those who deem the opposite. This essay will highlight why I chose to holiday abroad instead of exploring my own country for a number of reasons.
To begin with, international trips give an opportunity to see fresh cultures across the globe. As every region has its own heritage history, customs and traditions, experiencing these in-person is an enriching experience for an individual. Japanese, for instance, give importance to hierarchy and age representing respect for elder people thus will no traveling speak in front of seniors, however, Americans do not follow this hierarchy. In contrast, within the same nation there is not much difference in the way people live, think or operate thus there is extremely less chance to learn something. Such an exposure is a vital component of destinations I prefer to visit.
Another important factor is not only witnessing the advances made by people of other developed countries but also bringing ideas back to native place. These developments appeal because it gives food for thought to brain and people can implement them in their hometowns to improve living conditions. To exemplify, Flipkart was opened in India based on the big giant Amazon in USA and it revolutionized the whole Indian shopping landscape. Contrasting this with local tourism, it would offer only scenic beauty and tranquil. Thus, both seeing natural beauty and first-hand experience of different advancements is possible with foreign travel.
In conclusion, even though local sight-seeing provides wonderful holiday spots for scenery, I would prefer vacation in different parts of the world to experience new cultures and modernization. In future, schools and parents should take their children outside their home countries as it will enhance their experience and have better perspective of world.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, so, thus, for instance, in conclusion, in contrast, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1737.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.46226415094 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88057352088 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.676100628931 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 539.1 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.9034223091 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.8 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.4 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223907902656 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0612025512998 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0489439576334 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128344189918 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0439758002399 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.49 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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