The tendency of human being to copy one another is shown in the popularity of fashion clothes and
consumer goods. To what extent do you agree?
It is believed that rise in demand of consumer goods and clothes is due to human nature of copying each other,
Although people argue that an average person use his mind rather than imitate others but I believe that humans
do have an instinct to copy each other.
To some people, the concept of imitation may not come as natural. They are of the opinion that everyone is born
with some intellect and it depends upon the environment he is brought up that how he develops his intelligence
level. For example, great leaders including Mahatma Gandhi and Abdul Ghaffar Khan were least worried about the
fashion or consumer goods, and lived a very simple life but they were keen to get freedom for their people.
On the other hand, there are people including me, who believe that its natural for human to copy one another.
This can be seen by the rise in production of manufacturing industries such as textile,food and many others.
Although increase in population is also one the reasons but it is mainly beacause everybody want to own any
new thing that they see other person use, thus developing a kind of competition. A prime example can be seen
at the time of weddings where people incorporate the latest trends in their program such as type of food,
clothes and decoration.
Similarly, trying to develop certain personality traits of successful people is also very common. They believe
that by following the attributes of famous personalities, they too can progress in their life. For instance,
my brother used to search about personality attributes of Bill Gates as he wanted to become rich too.
To conclude, it is true that to copy each other is in human nature.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 10, column 87, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , food
...manufacturing industries such as textile,food and many others. Although increase in ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, similarly, so, thus, for example, for instance, kind of, such as, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1405.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8615916955 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56881208198 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.612456747405 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 449.1 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.7694171301 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.083333333 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0833333333 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.58333333333 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 17.0 4.38176352705 388% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.120977355705 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0410944070314 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0439515734411 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0435093497382 0.151304729494 29% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0451506338294 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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