There have been some problems with the bus service, especially its reliability, in your area over the last two weeks.
Write a letter to the manager of the bus company. In your letter
• describe what the problems are
• explain how these problems are affecting you
• suggest what you would like the company to do
You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to express my dissatisfaction about Tanzil bus service over its reliability which has been continuing over the last two weeks. Please allow me to explain the situation in more details.
I live at Kallyanpur and my office location is at Farmgate. During the peak-time (From 7 am to 9:30 am) I along with my other local people in our area have been facing difficulty to catch the Tanzil bus. The main problem we find is that the time-table of that bus is not appropriate. The bus comes generally every half an hour later or more over the last two weeks which was previously available
in 5 to 7 minutes interval. In addition, the bus is fully packed even though we know that this bus is sitting service.
For the above-mentioned reasons, we the people of Kallyanpur often find it difficult to attend the office on time. Moreover, school-going children also face the same problem to attend school as well.
Please, take necessary action on this issue. I look forward to hearing from you.
Kind Regards,
Rahat Hussain
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, moreover, so, well, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 882.0 1615.20841683 55% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 184.0 315.596192385 58% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79347826087 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 4.20363070211 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69370108213 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 176.041082164 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.663043478261 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 269.1 506.74238477 53% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.9886128333 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.5 106.682146367 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3333333333 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.91666666667 7.06120827912 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241618611117 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.066427878621 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0700184816336 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110153983687 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0794367439403 0.056905535591 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 13.0946893788 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.91 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 78.4519038076 48% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.