These days, the school introduces behavior of what is “right” or “wrong”. The responsibility is not only parents. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
A convincing argument and with my point of view can be made that not only the proper upbringing from parents but also the decent education at schools can have profound influences on the complete development of every child.
First and foremost, it should be claimed that parents play a particularly vital role in educating juveniles. It is the fact that most children always think that their parents are perfect creatures and doing-no-wrong characters, consequently, from an early age they have a tendency to imitate their parents' behaviors. Although parents can make some mistakes, what parents do through how they teach their's children will affect every aspect of children's life - from school to relationships with others. This raises the question that parents should always be exemplary pattern both in virtue and behavior if they want to have good children.
However, aside from being brought up properly from family, a well-rounded education at school is a key factor to help children mature both physically and intellectually. Civic education subject at school will provide children with a comprehensive view and plays an important role in helping form the moral foundation, and critical thinking. Moreover, different from the ambience of home life, it can be said that school is not only a place to teach knowledge to children but also a simulating society providing children with plenty of real opportunities to learn communication with people around them. Additionally, school educators are professional experts in the field of education, who have great experience in imparting children the necessary knowledge and luggage into life.
In conclusion, I agree a close cooperation between schools and parents in providing children with comprehensive education will play an extremely important role that needs to be performed seriously and closely.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e complete development of every child. First and foremost, it should be claimed...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, however, if, moreover, so, well, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1575.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44982698962 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00015853723 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581314878893 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 475.2 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 41.143650786 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 157.5 106.682146367 148% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.9 20.7667163134 139% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.8 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137758581674 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0605957598764 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0375140818951 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0879303482115 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0399329619281 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.7 13.0946893788 143% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.92 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.18 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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