Your friend had made a plan for you to see a movie together but you cannot now not join him. You've found another friend who can go instead of you.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter:
Explain why you cannot go anymore
Say who can go instead of you
Say why this person is a good person to go with
Dear Raju,
Hope you are doing good. I am really sorry to say that, I won't be able to make it to the movies we planned for this weekend. You know the nature of my work right? It was due to a last-minute critical requirement that came from the client-side. The whole team have decided to work during the weekend, so I would also need to be there. I was planning to have a good time with you, but this is not the correct moment I guess.
Even though I won't be able to accompany you, I have found an apt person to go with you. I had a call with your fiance and turns out she is free this weekend. So I have asked her to join you, I remember you mentioned to me once that she was mad at you for not taking her to the movies. I haven't mentioned that it's due to my unavailability, have just said that I have booked movie tickets for both of you. So be in sync with me and mention that you were also surprised.
Hope you two would have a great time together. Subsequently, I hope we can go for the movies next week, there is a movie called Extraction that is releasing with Chris on the lead role. Do write back with the movie experience with your beloved, waiting to hear from you.
Your's lovingly,
Ramu
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 287, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: haven't
...you for not taking her to the movies. I havent mentioned that its due to my unavailabi...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, really, so, i guess, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.48453608247 174% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 51.0 32.9175257732 155% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 967.0 937.175257732 103% => OK
No of words: 237.0 206.0 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.08016877637 4.54256449028 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30451604688 2.54303337028 91% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.556962025316 0.622605031667 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 305.1 290.88556701 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.9675935158 44.8134815571 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 64.4666666667 76.5299724578 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8 16.8248392259 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.66666666667 4.34317383033 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.31765996822 0.216113520407 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115073019148 0.0766984524023 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0678684423057 0.0603063233224 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.222736315606 0.12726935374 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0580689409375 0.0580467560999 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.7 8.37731958763 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 70.7449484536 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.09 8.71597938144 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.58 7.59969072165 87% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.