Today many children spend a lot of time playing computer games and little time on sports Why is it Is it a positive or negative development
Playing games is a quintessential part of everyone’s childhood. With the advent of internet and new technologies kids nowadays are keener to play video games on their computer screens from the comfort of their homes and thus spent little time on outdoor games. I believe that it is a negative development as it not only compromises the physical health but it also hampers the mental and physical health of the children.
Beyond any qualms there are myriads of logical reasons to prove that there are far more numerous negative consequences of playing computer games than the positive ones. According to recent research physical health issues like obesity and hyperglycemia have been found to be associated with prolonged sitting hours by kids and adults in front of their laptops. Furthermore, mental health issues like isolation, depression, bipolar disorders and increased suicidal tendency are also associated with spending endless hours alone with the mobile or computers thereby spending most of the time living in a virtual relationship with friends instead of developing real friendships. For instance, addition of PubG game that involves fighting enemies onscreen without the need to think on a cognitive level deteriorates both mind and body. This has been found to hamper personality development and most of such kids face issues in making friends and starting up conversations when they personally meet other people.
On the contrary, some people believe that playing laptop games in moderation and as a way to relax between works has been found to increase the work efficacy. Moreover, certain games that involve brainstorming have been found to sharpen the mind of kids. For example chess involves brainstorming before making the next move and it helps in building the intellectual skills of the kids.
In conclusion, I believe that adverse effects of playing computer games outweigh the benefits when kids fail to implement self-control on them and endlessly start playing video games without any pause. Playing video games is moderation and under parental guidance is necessary to prevent the serious physical and mental health issues in kids. Will parents understand the gravity of this stern matter? Still remains a question.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, moreover, so, still, thus, for example, for instance, in conclusion, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1897.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 355.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.34366197183 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34067318298 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77953526804 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56338028169 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 571.5 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.9724127046 49.4020404114 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.466666667 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6666666667 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.2 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229412422885 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0669414133811 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0584668204205 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137280190262 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0652009702768 0.056905535591 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.99 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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