Topic: CLASSROOM INVESTMENT. Do you think we should spend more money on classroom equipment or technology?
Technology is entered to each and every individual life and changed the way people learn things. While some people think that learning by using technology will be more effective where as some other people believe that learning with a teacher would be better. According to me I completely agree that technology plays a major role and more efficient method to learn new things.
On one side of the argument , there are people who believe that a teacher would be a better option. According to them , teachers have several years of experience and can monitor students in addition to these the students can get clarification immediately if have any doubts. For instance like maths subject , the teacher can help to explain on the topic with good and many examples till the students can able to understand and solve the problems. Thus, this shows why the teachers are important.
On the other side of the argument Although, teachers play key role in making people learn new things, it will be expensive and cannot able to hire a teacher for everything. In Addition to these it is really impossible for the working people to attend classes in person. I can say this is the key reason why technology is boosted up. There are many ways to learn new things In technology by using the YouTube, online classes on flexible timings , even free courses also available. For instance if a person want to prepare an English course there are bundle of online web sites , videos available in internet. Thus we can say technology help to learn things in flexible way with less cost.
To sum up all together , I feel the logical conclusion is that learning via technology saves time, cost and more efficient then teacher .I believe that Spending money on technology will create more miracles then spending money on teachers.
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...on technology will create more miracles then spending money on teachers.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, really, so, then, thus, while, for instance, i feel, in addition, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1504.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88311688312 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53731932771 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.522727272727 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 473.4 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.8665721596 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.428571429 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.07142857143 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 5.01903807615 379% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.11569053366 0.244688304435 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0399197491554 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0514426180262 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0870326165682 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0679882611743 0.056905535591 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.5 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.