Is a University Degree The Key to Success?
Nowadays, many students come up against difficulties when they have to choose between continuing education after graduating from high school and getting a job. Although working straight after school is not a bad choice, I believe that the better opportunity to have a more successful life is to go to college and university.
Firstly, the university provides a higher level of education and has all these resources and facilities for students. Learning is the key to everything, so higher education helps us widen our understanding. As a result, university graduates have access to more and better job opportunities, and they tend to earn higher salaries than those with fewer qualifications.
Secondly, students can meet many excellent teachers in universities like professors, masters who have a lot of experience and specialized knowledge, so they will be cleared up queries directly. Besides, students can take part in many beneficial activities and academic clubs such as English clubs, marketing clubs,… to exchange knowledge related to their major.
Thirdly, the job market is more increasingly competitive and a bachelor’s degree can be a huge advantage compared to other applicants. Employers would prefer a person who has a sufficient amount of knowledge to work efficiently with less training time. For example, it is impossible to become a doctor or lawyer without a bachelor’s degree.
For the above reasons, I believe that students with a higher academic background are likely to be more successful on the way of pursuing a dream job.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 314, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , …
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, for example, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1325.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 246.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38617886179 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14172946154 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.634146341463 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 415.8 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.2038958682 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.454545455 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3636363636 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.09090909091 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140850338031 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0440586973069 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0340911219268 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0624377290226 0.151304729494 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0326078468645 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.28 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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